PuffballsUnited's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[fireworkz]

It's good.

Keep working hard and I can see you improving. You've got potential. I would recommend adding sound to the next video. Maybe some music from the audio portal as well.

Keep animating and your skill will keep going up!

texx0101 responds:

thanks for reviewing my animation puffballs! keep up the good work and thanks for helpping me lauch my animations, texx =)

[Ted n' Rick: [Episode 1]]

Not too bad.

I can tell that you have potential, but there were a few problems with this movie.

1) It was kinda slow. I found myself getting a little bored at parts.

2) Some of the animation was a little weird. For example, when he gets in the car crash while eating, he starts flying out of the window before there's even an impact.

3) The jokes weren't too funny. Don't get me wrong, I did laugh at some parts (The Cell Phone was the most clever in my opinion) but some of the other jokes... I dunno. Maybe they just didn't appeal to someone my age?

Overall, keep it up! The more you make the more you improve, and I always like seeing someone get better and better.

KugelNosh responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I very much appreciate the compliments and the constructive criticism.

[The Lazor Collection]

Honestly.....

I didn't like it. It was very unoriginal... I don't think I laughed once to be honest, mainly because these jokes are old and predictable. You even made this in the same style as the original Lazer Collection.... Grow some originality, really.

On a positive note, the animation wasn't bad at all. The only gripe I have is that once again it seemed very similar to Dom Fera's work. If you're gonna make yet another lazer movie, at least put your own spin on it. Personally I thought the lazer collection was more creative.

mariomaster123 responds:

The point was to be like the lazer collection

[Sudden Remakes 1]

Great Idea!

The idea was really awesome and original. The voices were well done and the art was great. My only gripe is that the animation was a little below expectations. The frames per second could have been turned up for a better and smoother movie.
I'm looking forward to the next installment, but I hope that it isn't as jumpy as this one.

Cavebird responds:

Yes, inbetweens would make the film better.
This is really a film of cleaned up breakdowns.
I worked from the bottom up and just ran out of gas at this point.

[Remote Control Finder!]

I like it!

It was pretty funny. The art and animation was okay. The audio wasn't terrible but I recommend moving the mic away from yourself more when you record the voices.
that way you wont get all the breathing in there.
I really like how it followed the infomertial style. You should've had something like "If you call in now, you'll get this free Remote Control Finder Remote Finder!".
Anyway, good job and keep it up!

Fabul0us1 responds:

ok ill try that for the mic, just i had it close to my mouth b/c i though it wasnt recording loud enought and ya i was going to add the remote control remote control finder but i decide to go with the free remote so you can lose it so you can find it thing