PuffballsUnited's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ted n' Rick: [Episode 1]]

Not too bad.

I can tell that you have potential, but there were a few problems with this movie.

1) It was kinda slow. I found myself getting a little bored at parts.

2) Some of the animation was a little weird. For example, when he gets in the car crash while eating, he starts flying out of the window before there's even an impact.

3) The jokes weren't too funny. Don't get me wrong, I did laugh at some parts (The Cell Phone was the most clever in my opinion) but some of the other jokes... I dunno. Maybe they just didn't appeal to someone my age?

Overall, keep it up! The more you make the more you improve, and I always like seeing someone get better and better.

KugelNosh responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I very much appreciate the compliments and the constructive criticism.

[How Not to Climb a Cliff]

Made me lawl

I thought it was great! Love the animation style and the art! Some of the voices could have used some work though. For example, when the balloons fly away, I couldn't really hear what he said. Also when he coughed after being shocked it was pretty loud.

Great job, and I look forward to seeing more from you!

thumbsupguy responds:

Oh yeah, when the balloons fly away, the soft voice is actually part of the lyrics to the song. That wasn't me, but its my fault that it was confusing.

[Pokemon Master ep11]

Honestly....

It wasn't very good... The voices were bland and you breathed into the mic a lot. I couldn't even hear the old man. The music sounded very bad and was too loud at certain points. Also, I didn't see any humor in it. The memes were just annoyingly loud and I didn't think they were that funny (And I usually enjoy memes). The one tiny thing I thought was funny was how easy it was to win with a thunder-type pokemon.

Overall, I thought it was poorly made, but you have potential.
-Maybe if you moved away from sprites and brought your own originality into it, that could make it better.
-Work on your voices. The script felt bland and the voices sounded like you were reading them off of a sheet. Liven them up a little!
-Watch through your movie, and maybe have your friends watch it too. That way you can catch the different audio level problems. The music should not interfere with the dialogue.

Anyways, I hope this helped.

[Old Sonic parody (2007)]

I should've watched the other video before voting.

It was very unoriginal. First of all you 'remade' an existing flash video, but instead you added, not your own character, but Sonic and Spongebob. At first I thought it was decent, but then I watched the other video and realized where you got the humor from... I wouldn't even call this a parody, because the exact same things happened, just with different characters. You should have come up with your own idea. I see potential, but when it's used for something like this it's been wasted...

Some Advice:
-Clean up your frames. They seem all jagged and bumpy. If you're using Flash, try changing the smoothing on the brush, or using thicker strokes.
-Make sure ALL the audio is synced correctly. I felt that a few sounds overlapped and the last sound played a little early.

Keep working on your skills and I'm sure you'll get better.

[Metal Gear Awesome 2.5]

Well,

\ thought it was funny anyway! So random I actually did laugh! Also since the score was so low, I voted 5. ;)

[Dante's Inferno w/ Mario]

Hilarious!

That was awesome! I love all of the facial expressions and body language. Toad's voice was done really well. I caught myself laughing at it a few times (Along with the facial expressions).

The one thing this needed though was some sort of conclusion. Like, Mario realizing the 'Wrongs of His Ways' or whatever. I feel like it just kinda ended. Anyways, great job!

[town test for school]

Waaaay Off.

I rated this for what it was. A test of the top view of a town. And you failed. The perspectives of the buildings did not match. For example, the church in the corner sits right next to the hospital and yet, they're seen from nearly completely different angles. Same goes for the cars and the people. I give you a two for being able to draw the buildings and vehicles...

[The Lazor Collection]

Honestly.....

I didn't like it. It was very unoriginal... I don't think I laughed once to be honest, mainly because these jokes are old and predictable. You even made this in the same style as the original Lazer Collection.... Grow some originality, really.

On a positive note, the animation wasn't bad at all. The only gripe I have is that once again it seemed very similar to Dom Fera's work. If you're gonna make yet another lazer movie, at least put your own spin on it. Personally I thought the lazer collection was more creative.

mariomaster123 responds:

The point was to be like the lazer collection

[A Flash]

Pretty Good!

I liked it! Usually when flash movies don't have sound, they suck, but here it works very well. It adds it's own sort of humor to the movie. Also the Frame-by-Frame was done very well. Especially the lip syncing at the end (Which was hilarious by the way).

Hmm, can't really think of much to improve on. This had a unique style that fit very well. Keep it up. I'm sure you can make something that isn't 'completely colorless-soundless-effortless'.

[Snowbot]

Wow... That was really good!

The animation was exceptional. It was really smooth and I love the way you brought out a 3D effect. Made the movie much better. The song was nice too and fit really well with the movie. It's cool how you made the electronic notes his voice.

The only downside, I think, would be that there wasn't really any point. And if there was, I didn't really catch it. Was the robot causing the snow or was that just coincidence?

The transforming at the end was really cool! (^_^)-b