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[Sudden Remakes 1]

Great Idea!

The idea was really awesome and original. The voices were well done and the art was great. My only gripe is that the animation was a little below expectations. The frames per second could have been turned up for a better and smoother movie.
I'm looking forward to the next installment, but I hope that it isn't as jumpy as this one.

Cavebird responds:

Yes, inbetweens would make the film better.
This is really a film of cleaned up breakdowns.
I worked from the bottom up and just ran out of gas at this point.

[Smoke Consequences]

It has potential.

It wasn't too bad. The parts that were animated were pretty good. I would stick to using less tweens and more frame by frame. The art wasn't bad either, a little rugged but that's your style.
There were some parts that were kind of confusing. Like when the guy fell on a bomb it knocked down the smoking guy? I didn't really catch how that tied together. Also, definitely add sound. That'll make any movie better. Music would make it better too. I'm sure you could find something in the Audio Portal that fits.

You have the animating potential to make something good, all you need to do is put in a bit more effort (And sound effects :3 )

[Remote Control Finder!]

I like it!

It was pretty funny. The art and animation was okay. The audio wasn't terrible but I recommend moving the mic away from yourself more when you record the voices.
that way you wont get all the breathing in there.
I really like how it followed the infomertial style. You should've had something like "If you call in now, you'll get this free Remote Control Finder Remote Finder!".
Anyway, good job and keep it up!

Fabul0us1 responds:

ok ill try that for the mic, just i had it close to my mouth b/c i though it wasnt recording loud enought and ya i was going to add the remote control remote control finder but i decide to go with the free remote so you can lose it so you can find it thing

[March of the Snowmen!]

Good.

The art and animation is good. It's nice and smooth. The only thing that bothers me is the song. It gets really annoying after a while...