Score: 7

"Not too bad."

submission: Ted n' Rick: [Episode 1]

date: July 7, 2009

I can tell that you have potential, but there were a few problems with this movie.

1) It was kinda slow. I found myself getting a little bored at parts.

2) Some of the animation was a little weird. For example, when he gets in the car crash while eating, he starts flying out of the window before there's even an impact.

3) The jokes weren't too funny. Don't get me wrong, I did laugh at some parts (The Cell Phone was the most clever in my opinion) but some of the other jokes... I dunno. Maybe they just didn't appeal to someone my age?

Overall, keep it up! The more you make the more you improve, and I always like seeing someone get better and better.

Score: 9

"Made me lawl"

submission: How Not to Climb a Cliff

date: May 24, 2009

I thought it was great! Love the animation style and the art! Some of the voices could have used some work though. For example, when the balloons fly away, I couldn't really hear what he said. Also when he coughed after being shocked it was pretty loud.

Great job, and I look forward to seeing more from you!

Score: 3

"I should've watched the other video before voting."

submission: Old Sonic parody (2007)

date: April 9, 2009

It was very unoriginal. First of all you 'remade' an existing flash video, but instead you added, not your own character, but Sonic and Spongebob. At first I thought it was decent, but then I watched the other video and realized where you got the humor from... I wouldn't even call this a parody, because the exact same things happened, just with different characters. You should have come up with your own idea. I see potential, but when it's used for something like this it's been wasted...

Some Advice:
-Clean up your frames. They seem all jagged and bumpy. If you're using Flash, try changing the smoothing on the brush, or using thicker strokes.
-Make sure ALL the audio is synced correctly. I felt that a few sounds overlapped and the last sound played a little early.

Keep working on your skills and I'm sure you'll get better.

Score: 8

"Made me laugh!"

submission: S.D.U.A.M.B.

date: February 25, 2009

The only problem I had with it was that the sound started falling behind. It's one of my biggest pet peeves, but it should be easy to fix. Really liked your style of humor. Keep it up!

Score: 5

"Honestly....."

submission: The Lazor Collection

date: January 27, 2009

I didn't like it. It was very unoriginal... I don't think I laughed once to be honest, mainly because these jokes are old and predictable. You even made this in the same style as the original Lazer Collection.... Grow some originality, really.

On a positive note, the animation wasn't bad at all. The only gripe I have is that once again it seemed very similar to Dom Fera's work. If you're gonna make yet another lazer movie, at least put your own spin on it. Personally I thought the lazer collection was more creative.

Score: 8

"Great Idea!"

submission: Sudden Remakes 1

date: November 9, 2008

The idea was really awesome and original. The voices were well done and the art was great. My only gripe is that the animation was a little below expectations. The frames per second could have been turned up for a better and smoother movie.
I'm looking forward to the next installment, but I hope that it isn't as jumpy as this one.

Score: 5

"Found a problem"

submission: Avoid and touch V0.1

date: July 15, 2008

You can just right click and skip to the end of the mazes, making the game extremely easy to beat. Also, it was pretty short. I would recommend making it more in depth and adding more than just four levels.

Score: 8

"Good, but...."

submission: SMW: Bowser Battle!

date: January 29, 2008

There's really no point in making this. If I wanted to fight Bowser from SMW I'd play the original.

Score: 7

"I like it!"

submission: Remote Control Finder!

date: January 28, 2008

It was pretty funny. The art and animation was okay. The audio wasn't terrible but I recommend moving the mic away from yourself more when you record the voices.
that way you wont get all the breathing in there.
I really like how it followed the infomertial style. You should've had something like "If you call in now, you'll get this free Remote Control Finder Remote Finder!".
Anyway, good job and keep it up!