Score: 8

"Made me laugh!"

submission: S.D.U.A.M.B.

date: February 25, 2009

The only problem I had with it was that the sound started falling behind. It's one of my biggest pet peeves, but it should be easy to fix. Really liked your style of humor. Keep it up!

Score: 2

"Waaaay Off."

submission: town test for school

date: February 17, 2009

I rated this for what it was. A test of the top view of a town. And you failed. The perspectives of the buildings did not match. For example, the church in the corner sits right next to the hospital and yet, they're seen from nearly completely different angles. Same goes for the cars and the people. I give you a two for being able to draw the buildings and vehicles...

Score: 8

"That was fun! :D"

submission: Paper Mario Musical Mini

date: January 27, 2009

Even though it was kinda pointless I really enjoyed playing. It was well animated and the music fit well! Maybe you could make this into some sorta DDR type of game or something?
Great job!

Score: 1

"Come on!"

submission: [PP] u suk lolol

date: January 27, 2009

I swear, there's like 5 of these submitted every day! Is there really need for another one? Let alone one with only two levels?! Add your own twist to this overdone type of game. Make it original. Music and sound effects would help too. Also, I'm sure you're aware of the cheat that exists in almost every single one of these games that I've played. You can either hold the mouse button down or right click and then just skip to the end. Don't be lazy. If you found a glitch, fix it!
You get one point for the copied Action Script, and that's being generous.

Score: 5

"Honestly....."

submission: The Lazor Collection

date: January 27, 2009

I didn't like it. It was very unoriginal... I don't think I laughed once to be honest, mainly because these jokes are old and predictable. You even made this in the same style as the original Lazer Collection.... Grow some originality, really.

On a positive note, the animation wasn't bad at all. The only gripe I have is that once again it seemed very similar to Dom Fera's work. If you're gonna make yet another lazer movie, at least put your own spin on it. Personally I thought the lazer collection was more creative.

Score: 8

"Pretty Good!"

submission: A Flash

date: January 26, 2009

I liked it! Usually when flash movies don't have sound, they suck, but here it works very well. It adds it's own sort of humor to the movie. Also the Frame-by-Frame was done very well. Especially the lip syncing at the end (Which was hilarious by the way).

Hmm, can't really think of much to improve on. This had a unique style that fit very well. Keep it up. I'm sure you can make something that isn't 'completely colorless-soundless-effortless'.

Score: 9

"Wow... That was really good!"

submission: Snowbot

date: January 2, 2009

The animation was exceptional. It was really smooth and I love the way you brought out a 3D effect. Made the movie much better. The song was nice too and fit really well with the movie. It's cool how you made the electronic notes his voice.

The only downside, I think, would be that there wasn't really any point. And if there was, I didn't really catch it. Was the robot causing the snow or was that just coincidence?

The transforming at the end was really cool! (^_^)-b

Score: 8

"Great Idea!"

submission: Sudden Remakes 1

date: November 9, 2008

The idea was really awesome and original. The voices were well done and the art was great. My only gripe is that the animation was a little below expectations. The frames per second could have been turned up for a better and smoother movie.
I'm looking forward to the next installment, but I hope that it isn't as jumpy as this one.

Score: 6

"Decent"

submission: Easy Actionscript Tutoria

date: November 5, 2008

The information that you included was correct and it was explained, which is a plus. (Some tutorials just give you code...) Adding some music would help spice it up to make it less boring. You could also work on making it look nicer. The solid colors and the bumpy buttons don't look very professional.

Keep at it and remember these suggestions for next time. The more things you make, the more feedback you get, and the more you improve. Good luck in the future!

Score: 5

"It has potential."

submission: Smoke Consequences

date: November 5, 2008

It wasn't too bad. The parts that were animated were pretty good. I would stick to using less tweens and more frame by frame. The art wasn't bad either, a little rugged but that's your style.
There were some parts that were kind of confusing. Like when the guy fell on a bomb it knocked down the smoking guy? I didn't really catch how that tied together. Also, definitely add sound. That'll make any movie better. Music would make it better too. I'm sure you could find something in the Audio Portal that fits.

You have the animating potential to make something good, all you need to do is put in a bit more effort (And sound effects :3 )