Age/Gender: 19, Male
Location: Oregon
Job: Flashimating
I draw stuff. Also I can music.
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Latest Flash Reviews
I dunno why, but I really liked this game! The programming was well done and the music fit the mood of the game. I also like the fact that there were several different ways to get through certain areas. I liked being able to climb the walls and the character was cool too (Even though he's so simple). I ended up making my own noises for him when I messed up :P. The programming was also well done. The controls were very smooth and I did not have any trouble with them. One tiny thing though. when those big black blocks crush you, jumping into the sides of them kills you too. I didn't think it should be like that, but it's your call.
Now for some of the flaws. There wasn't much of a plot, or anything for that matter. Here's controls, now go! I wish I knew why I was going wherever I was going. The game was actually a little too easy. I think the longest I was stuck at a room was about a minute (The gun ball shooty room). Maybe making three different paths each with their own difficulties would be something you could do? That would add some replayability to the game as well.
Anyways, that's it from me.
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I can tell that you have potential, but there were a few problems with this movie.
1) It was kinda slow. I found myself getting a little bored at parts.
2) Some of the animation was a little weird. For example, when he gets in the car crash while eating, he starts flying out of the window before there's even an impact.
3) The jokes weren't too funny. Don't get me wrong, I did laugh at some parts (The Cell Phone was the most clever in my opinion) but some of the other jokes... I dunno. Maybe they just didn't appeal to someone my age?
Overall, keep it up! The more you make the more you improve, and I always like seeing someone get better and better.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback! I very much appreciate the compliments and the constructive criticism.
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I thought it was great! Love the animation style and the art! Some of the voices could have used some work though. For example, when the balloons fly away, I couldn't really hear what he said. Also when he coughed after being shocked it was pretty loud.
Great job, and I look forward to seeing more from you!
Author's Response:
Oh yeah, when the balloons fly away, the soft voice is actually part of the lyrics to the song. That wasn't me, but its my fault that it was confusing.
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Latest Audio Reviews
The song started so well and I was thinking I might download, but then the guitars came in.... I expected them to be much heavier and deeper to fit the feel of the song. They work pretty well for the triplets in the middle however. But yeah, the guitars need WAY more emphasis, maybe even lower them an octave.
The beginning was so good, but the guitars let me down.. :( Sorry.
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I love the bass that comes in at 0:27! Actually, the bass in the ENTIRE song is awesome! I really like how the song starts off intense, but by the end it's got a little bit of a different feel to it. The key the song is in at the very end makes the song sound a little bit hopeful.
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I've always been a big fan on Grant Kirkhopes music and this song is a great homage to the composers at rare. My favorite part is at 0:50 when the melody that you came up with yourself comes in. Same thing goes for 1:46. :)
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